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[should be] - billy/dom

It should be hot here, so many people pressing in with wanting, lights flashing bright and blinding, but Billy is holding back, standing in the chill of his own shadow as they look beyond him and scream.

He should be used to it, but he's fighting acclimation and he shivers.

Dominic's speaking so low in his ear that Billy shouldn't even be able to hear him, but he thinks he could hear Dominic's voice anywhere, salubrious, a benediction. Dominic's body is a calefacient to drive away any cold, feeding off of the energy of the crowd.

Together, they plot escape.

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kiltsandlollies
Oct. 6th, 2004 06:43 am (UTC)
Yes.

Dominic's speaking so low in his ear that Billy shouldn't even be able to hear him, but he thinks he could hear Dominic's voice anywhere, salubrious, a benediction.

Such a little thing, but to such great effect. How I love your writing. *paws*
marginalia
Oct. 7th, 2004 07:05 pm (UTC)
thank you so much, dear!

i have no monaboyd icon anymore! how can this be?
starfishchick
Oct. 6th, 2004 07:46 am (UTC)
Lovely. That first sentence. *chills of my own*
marginalia
Oct. 7th, 2004 07:05 pm (UTC)
thank you!
deaver
Oct. 6th, 2004 09:51 am (UTC)
Together, they plot escape.

Priceless.
marginalia
Oct. 7th, 2004 07:06 pm (UTC)
thank you :)
dorrie6
Oct. 7th, 2004 03:58 am (UTC)
This moved along like a poem being read out loud at a coffee house. I could hear it being read, the inflections and everything.

I have no idea what that means, but I can say it was really cool.
marginalia
Oct. 7th, 2004 07:10 pm (UTC)
that's a new one ;) thank you!
boy_in_blue
Nov. 2nd, 2004 01:27 am (UTC)
Oh how lovely that was! So well written:)
marginalia
Nov. 4th, 2004 01:16 am (UTC)
thank you!
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